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More Courageous (To Overcome)

Summary:

An AU in which everything goes even more poorly than it does in canon, set to Achilles Come Down by Gang of Youths.

Notes:

Hello all! This is my first time posting on here, and my first time posting anything I’ve written in general in a long, LONG time. I wrote this for fun based on a whim, and my friend encouraged me to post it, so I thought I might as well.
That being said, while I did have a lot of fun with this, the entire premise is pretty dark. Mind the tags, and if you think you might be triggered by any of the content please turn back now! Keep yourselves safe.
Oh, and I don’t own the Percy Jackson franchise OR the lyrics to the song Achilles Come Down. I also do NOT speak French and got the transcriptions elsewhere, so if there are any mistakes please let me know. I hope you enjoy!

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Work Text:

[Percy is on the roof of the temple to Poseidon on Mount Olympus, kneeling very close to the edge and looking down at the drop to the city street 600 stories below. He is cradling Annabeth’s dead body in his arms, rocking slightly back and forth. There are several empty vials of what appear to have been Nectar scattered around him. Some of the bottles seem shattered, like they were thrown down in anger or grief. Clouds are rapidly forming in the sky, and the sea that can be seen in the background is tumultuous. A group of demigods run up towards the base of the temple, but stop halfway and seem hesitant to move closer. Percy startles when he hears them and turns around, drawing Riptide while still clutching Annabeth’s body close to his chest. His eyes appear bloodshot and feverish and his skin is glowing slightly, an apparent aftereffect of the Nectar he consumed. Nasty looking burns decorate his whole body, and he is covered in blood, but it appears Achilles’ curse is preventing him from burning up completely. He stares at the other demigods, wild-eyed, and rain begins lashing down around the group as the wind howls. He does not let go of Riptide, despite seeing who is below him. One of the demigods, Nico di Angelo, breaks off from the group and begins slowly inching closer to the temple, hands held out placatingly. He begins to sing softly.]

Achilles, Achilles, Achilles, come down

Won't you get up off, get up off the roof?

You're scaring us and all of us, [at this there is the rumble of thunder, presumably from Zeus, and Nico glares at the sky but amends] some of us love you

Achilles, it's not much but there's proof

[aside

Clarisse, trying to sound nonchalant but failing: Why are you calling Prissy Achilles?

Nico: The curse is affecting his emotions right? Maybe appealing to that will calm him down.

Clarisse scoffs, but picks up the chorus where Nico left off, also inching closer to the base of the temple.]

You crazy-ass cosmonaut, remember your virtue

Redemption lies plainly in truth

[aside

Nico: What is that supposed to mean?

Clarisse ignores him and continues to sing.]

Just humor us, Achilles, Achilles, come down

Won't you get up off, get up off the roof?

[Percy appears more agitated than before, and is beginning to draw the attention of some of the minor gods and other beings on Olympus. The rain begins to swirl around his body, creating a shield. The Muses begin to chant.]

Je vois que beaucoup de gens meurent

Parce qu'ils estiment que la vie ne vaut pas la peine d'être vécue

J'en vois d'autres, qui se font paradoxalement tués pour des idées

Pour des illusions, qui leurs donnent une raison de vivre

Ce, qu'on appelle une raison de vivre est en même temps une excellente raison de mourir

[The rain is now completely obscuring Percy’s form. The sea in the background is growing ever more dangerous, and a giant wave can be seen building offshore. Nico begins to sing again, slightly more frantically. He has loosened his sword in its scabbard and shadows seem to grow around him as he sings, but he makes no move to get any closer to Percy.]

Achilles, Achilles, Achilles, come down

Won't you get up off, get up off the roof?

The self is not so weightless, nor whole and unbroken

Remember the pact of our youth

Where you go, I'm going, so jump and I'm jumping

Since there is no me without you

[aside

Will Solace, striding forward from the back of the group: You will not.

Nico: Hush, I’m just making this up as I go along.]

Soldier on, Achilles, Achilles, come down

Won't you get up off, get up off the roof?

[The wall of rain abates for a split second as Percy seems to falter slightly. Nico shadow travels to the rooftop, opposite Percy, and the rain starts back up again with a vengeance, buffeting Nico. A wall of shadows seem to form around him as protection. Will picks up the song where Nico left off.]

Loathe the way they light candles in Rome

But love the sweet air of the votives

Hurt and grieve but don't suffer alone

Engage with the pain as a motive

[The attention of the Muses seems to have drawn some of the elder gods, and Apollo appears next to his son and begins to sing in unison with Will.]

Today, of all days, see

How the most dangerous thing is to love

How you will heal and you'll rise above

[The Muses begin to chant again.]

D'un gérant d'immeuble qui s'était tué on disait un jour

Qu'il avait perdu sa fille depuis cinq ans

Qu'il avait beaucoup changé depuis et que cette histoire l'avait

[Athena, seeing the commotion and furious at the death of her daughter, appears suddenly on the roof between Nico and Percy. The rain intensifies and a tsunami can be seen headed for the city as Athena begins to sing with vitriol in her voice.]

Achilles, Achilles, Achilles, jump now

You are absent of cause or excuse

So self-indulgent and self-referential

No audience could ever want you

You crave the applause yet hate the attention

Then miss it, your act is a ruse

It is empty, Achilles, so end it all now

It's a pointless resistance for you

[The tsunami crashes into the coast. Percy is inching closer to the edge of the roof, though he appears to have set Annabeth’s body down gently. Shadows are reaching out from Nico but they can’t penetrate the wall of rain. The Muses begin to chant again.]

Ce qui déclenche la crise est presque toujours incontrôlable

Les journaux parlent souvent de chagrins intimes ou de maladie incurable

Ces explications sont valables

Mais il faudrait savoir si le jour même un ami

Du désespéré ne lui a pas parlé sur un ton indifférent

Celui-là est le

[Nico begins to sing once more, edging even closer to Percy.]

Achilles, Achilles, just put down the bottle

Don't listen to what you've consumed

It's chaos, confusion and wholly unworthy

Of feeding and it's wholly untrue

You may feel no purpose nor a point for existing

It's all just conjecture and gloom

And there may not be meaning, so find one and seize it

Do not waste yourself on this roof

Hear those bells ring deep in the soul

Chiming away for a moment

Feel your breath course frankly below

And see life as a worthy opponent

[As Nico’s voice falters, Will and Apollo take over once more.]

Today, of all days, see

How the most dangerous thing is to love

How you will heal and you'll rise above

Crowned by an overture bold and beyond

Ah, it's more courageous to overcome

[The Muses begin to chant again.]

Les souvenirs d'une patrie perdue, l'espoir d'une terre promise

Ce divorce entre l'homme de sa vie

[The rain is faltering by this point, but Athena starts to sing once more. Nico begins to sing as well, trying to refute her statements as the tempest wars with itself.]

You want the acclaim, the mother of mothers (it's not worth it, Achilles)

More poignant than fame or the taste of another (don't listen, Achilles)

But be real and just jump, you dense motherfucker (you're worth more, Achilles)

You will not be more than a rat in the gutter (so much more than a rat)

You want my opinion, my opinion you've got (no one asked your opinion)

You asked for my counsel, I gave you my thoughts (no one asked for your thoughts)

Be done with this now and jump off the roof (be done with this now and get off the roof)

Can you hear me, Achilles? I'm talking to you

I'm talking to you

I'm talking to you

I'm talking to you

Achilles, come down

Achilles, come down

[The Muses begin to chant once more.]

Celle du oui et celle du non

Ce serait trop beau

Mais il faut faire la part de ceux qui, sans conclure, interrogent toujours

Ici, j'ironise à peine, il s'agit de la majorité

Je vois également que ceux qui répondent non agissent comme s'ils pensaient oui

De fait

[Apollo begins to sing, alone, as more of the coastline is destroyed in the background and the tempest continues to thrash around Percy. Nico is unsuccessfully attempting to grab him with shadows and wrest control.]

Throw yourself into the unknown

With pace and a fury defiant

Clothe yourself in beauty untold

And see life as a means to a triumph

[Percy falls unconscious as Apollo appears next to him and catches him deftly. He finishes out the song softly, perhaps imbuing more of the power he used to render Percy unconscious into his words. The clouds begin to dissipate as the Sun pierces through.]

Today, of all days, see

How the most dangerous thing is to love

How you will heal and you'll rise above

Crowned by an overture bold and beyond

Ah, it's more courageous to overcome

Notes:

I’m sure New York survived that, don’t worry about it…
Thanks for sticking it out to the end! Go drink some water :)