Honestly, this story is amazing! the plot is similar but not exactly the same is Giacarems story, so i wouldn't worry about that too much. Also, for the hybrid stuff, I think it's fine. It gives each character something unique, and also it might help them fight (or smth). overall, i think your really good at writing, and i really enjoyed the plot so far. see u! :)
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Shimmerunicorn on Chapter 2 Sat 16 Dec 2023 01:38AM UTC
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