Comment on World’s Saddest Breakfast Club

  1. Ididloveyou_once Sat 31 Jul 2021 09:43AM UTC

    This is a masterpiece! I'm in love.

    Your characterization here is just flawless and this [Well, that’s just the icing on the lobster thermidor.] absolutely killed me. The humor feels so natural and the dialogue is not forced at all. It's all so perfectly sibling-like - I absolutely LOVED Jason closing the blinds on Steph. Plus, all of the added little details like Dick's shoulder and the classical music - Tim is a sweetheart.

    This is genuinely impeccable! You're so talented and I'm jealous.

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    1. motleyfam Sun 01 Aug 2021 01:26PM UTC

      This comment gave me the biggest grin, thank you so much dude! Your characterizations are top tier in my book, so it really means a lot coming from you 💚
      And I'm glad you liked the icing line because after I wrote it I was like "Is this too dumb?" and then like "maybe but ima just go for it and see what happens" hahah

      Thanks so much for reading!

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