OK you asked for it so here you go LOL! Right off the bat, Nabriales is forward, not quite demanding though certainly on the pushy side. Assertive. I love it :D and "the prospect of *performing* with the Ascians again, and again..." *shiver* love this... the twin meaning is just exquisite!
Lahabrea's reaction when Elidibus gives him the go-ahead is just an absolute delight, the little blush and look down, and the way the others come around to help (and then *help* hehe) is really sweet and sexy all at once. The glut of touch that follows is just spot-on, delightful pushing to overwhelm without overdoing it. Special mention for Nabriales going down (because you know he does) and especially the idea of those sideburns brushing along inner thighs.... hoogh is it hot in here suddenly?? And feeling the *throb* inside is A++, something about that visceral and tangible desire reaction is very nice!
Apparently I will never *not* have a visceral reaction to the concept of Elidibus's voice being hoarse with desire because I made a *sound* ok at that mental... image? What do you call a clearly heard yet invented sound in your head? lol. Anyway, playful Nabriales is also super hot, and both is the clear and plain correct answer here hehe! Elidibus teeth smile bluescreen *static* hhhhh.... I like that hehehe...
Nabriales here is absolutely perfect, the consummate show-off, determined to win her to his, er, THEIR side and make sure she doesn't regret it one whit. And making Elidibus's self-control fragment is absolutely delicious! Slowly growing flush, that little moment when his eyes betray his need... the whimpers... my god the whimpers. (I love a he and I love how you wrote him, it's SO GOOD oh my god!!) Emet-Selch enjoying watching is a delightful touch for real... his time will come, of course, and I think it highlights his patience! And the cuddle pile at the end is all I've ever wanted. I know I've said it before but I don't care - thank you again for this wonderful gift. I'm selfishly glad it took off a bit, and I hope it was because of the fun of the writing!!
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Neila_Nuruodo Thu 14 May 2020 07:12AM UTC
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