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  1. Loved this! Too bad it's over already. I really think you captured the characters will ♥️ thank you for sharing!

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    1. I'm super glad that you enjoyed it. As more and more people read it, I'm glad that I managed to push it into the world.

      Before this got posted, I was definitely hoping to finish my part two, but i guess it wasn't meant to be. in case you're interested, chapter 2 would've went: Qifrey wakes up in the atelier after having passed out from his exhaustion. It's been a couple days recovering with Olruggio's care. He remembers what happened with Iguin coming inside the atelier and is adamant to Olly that the brimhat is in the house. But Olly and the girls say that there is no one but them in the atelier. Since they have transported the atelier to a rocky isolated mountain full of snow and that icy stuff, they are more or less stuck inside, with the nearest village being about a mile away. Qifrey isn't well, and everyone can tell, but he insists on searching the home for Iguin. This is where the story falls apart though because I couldn't figure out how Iguin was going to steal Coco away considering there's no clear understanding of transmutation and the like. My ideas revolved around Iguin transforming himself back and forth into ink, and he was hiding in Qifrey's ink bottle. He was going to possess Olly and walk out the door with Coco...but yeah, never figured how it would work!

      thank you for reading

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