I was a little hesitant with the em-dashes, and semicolons, but after reading the first chapter none of the alarm bells are ringing. I can’t help but be a little paranoid regarding ai usage… what a dreadful thing.
You write beautifully, and I am very pleased by this chapter. I look forward to seeing how this goes
Yeah so am I, I kind of just naturally write like this, and how I think this Tim would think, AI is kind of ruining a lot of writing, but either way I’m glad you liked it!
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