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“To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.”
— Ralph Waldo Emerson
No one who looked upon her could have mistaken Eloise Bridgerton for a debutante. That had been the intention, one supposes, from the moment her mother had summoned her from Scotland and declared that Eloise’s return to society must be marked with something of a spectacle. Yet, even as Eloise descends the grand staircase into the candlelit inferno of her mother’s masquerade, she cannot help but register the parade of whitened arms, the feathered masks, the pearled bodices that render her own blue gown meant to resemble heroic defiance rather than matrimonial invitation. Atop her head she has a cropped flaxen wig, and above her nose, a blue marine mask. The effect, Eloise is told, is “striking,” by which her mother plainly means “unsettling.” All the better.
She finds it difficult to locate the promised “splendour” of the evening. It is, in the end, a garden-variety London ball, given airs and disguises: the same names, the same marriages quietly negotiated in corners, the same coterie of gentlemen who move as if they expect a laurel for endurance. The masquerade theme has added a certain theatricality, but all are recognisable to anyone who cared to look closely.
Her mother’s voice, silvery and lethal, finds her even above the din of strings and glassware.
“Eloise! You cannot possibly think to hide with a wig so…well. It is very… continental.”
Violet Bridgerton is costumed as a late-blooming Marie Antoinette, towering above the room in feathered hauteur. Her mask is unnecessary; everyone knows a queen when they see one.
Eloise attempts a smile. “It is hardly a wig at all, Mama. I merely cut the old one. For economy.”
Her mother’s eyes narrow behind the velvet mask, calculating the mischief in her daughter’s tone. “Economy is not a virtue in London. Least of all tonight.”
Eloise glances over the assembled guests: her sisters, arrayed in silks of pale green and rose, arms bare but for mother’s borrowed pearls; the endless string of lordlings, each distinguished by his own variety of waistcoat and his own brand of vapidity.
“Is it not,” Eloise says quietly, “the very height of economy to wear a disguise that is no disguise at all?”
Her mother either misses the barb or, as is her practice, chooses to let it pass. “You will be sociable, Eloise. I have already promised your company to three gentlemen of good fortune, one of them an earl. Be kind.”
“I am always kind,” Eloise murmurs, but her mother is already scanning the crowd, tallying social capital, plotting advances. It is only now that Eloise allows herself a real look at the assembled guests, who circulate in the torch-lit ballroom in eddies of color and longing.
Francesca, her younger sister, is here as a white swan, trailing after Lady Danbury and tugging at her stiff brocade. Daphne, the eldest, is radiant in Grecian white, holding court at the center of the room, her grace magnified by the ridiculous goddess crown her husband, the Duke, had insisted she wear.
Eloise watches the drama unfold as if she were a character in a play with no lines. She is a curiosity, an oddity, a bauble, but not the main attraction.
A wave of sudden heat swamps her as the orchestra surges into a waltz. The dancers form a carousel of glitter and desperation; Eloise feels herself an alien species, exposed and faintly comical. The few friends she had maintained before Scotland now avert their eyes, or nod with faint embarrassment, as if to acknowledge that Eloise’s season has long since turned.
She could, she supposes, make herself useful. Fetch a drink. Rescue Francesca from the horrors of Lady Danbury’s ancient anecdotes. She does neither, instead tracing the perimeter of the ballroom, observing and, she admits, judging.
The social contract is in full effect tonight. Faces hidden, names whispered, fortunes calculated and re-calculated. What changes, Eloise wonders, when the masks come off? Do people ever stop playing their parts?
She is so lost in this reverie that she nearly misses the approach of her eldest brother. He is disguised as… well, as himself, merely wearing a mask of black lace that makes his features more wolfish. He pauses before her, surveys her from boot to battered wig.
“Joan of Arc, is it?” Anthony says. “How appropriate. I expect you to incite an uprising by midnight.”
She gives him a look meant to convey both affection and exasperation. “A pity you could not manage more than a mask, brother. Though I suppose all the best villains prefer to be seen.”
Anthony’s smirk is almost fond. “And all the best rebels prefer to be heard.” He leans in. “Mother is in rare form tonight. Do try not to offend the entire county until at least the second course.”
With that he is gone, swept into the swirl of the waltz, and Eloise is alone again. She considers the array of men her mother has no doubt lined up for her. She considers escape. She considers, briefly, how one might set fire to a ballroom without detection.
Instead, she moves to the window, presses her palm against the cold pane, and surveys the moonlit gardens outside. For a moment, she thinks she sees something moving between the hedges, maybe a shadow, or perhaps a person…but when she blinks it is gone.
Behind her, the orchestra rises and the dance continues.
Eloise is neither a coward nor a liar, and so she does, in good faith, attempt to fulfill her promise. Her mother’s curation of eligible men is, by any standard, impressive: all are tall, broad-shouldered, and possessed of at least one classical feature. Each is introduced with an elaborate preface: “the future of the baronetcy,” “recently returned from the Continent,” “cousin to a Marquess”; as if Eloise might be dazzled by the resume. She is not.
The first, a Lord Fitzhugh, speaks as if addressing a crowded Parliament rather than a single woman in a corner of the ballroom. His opening is a dissertation on the relative merits of country versus city living, a topic he pursues with the tenacity of a barnacle.
“Of course, the Thames is something to be endured rather than admired,” he pronounces, holding a glass of ratafia so close to his face that his mask, a cheap cardboard affair, has become sodden. “Whereas up North, one breathes more freely. I hear you have travelled. Scotland, was it?”
Eloise has no interest in the particulars of his life, but she is not wholly ungracious. “I was in Edinburgh for a time. The air is… bracing.” She withholds her true thoughts, which concern the local haggis, the pervading smell of peat, and her fondness for the libraries.
Fitzhugh smiles with all the triumph of a man who has successfully extracted a yes-or-no answer. “Precisely! The air. One feels oneself hardier, more alive. Do you ride, Miss Bridgerton?”
“Not well.”
“Swim?”
“In the summer. Rarely.”
He seems thrown off by her brevity, as if women are meant to display themselves like wares at a market. He tries again: “My mother says I am to marry before the year is out. My father agrees.” He blinks, as if unsure how to progress to the next step. “I… hope you find London more to your liking, now that you have returned.”
Eloise wonders if he has ever said anything original in his life. She wonders if he is even real, or merely an extension of the house in which he was born, the habits he was taught. She gives him her best imitation of a smile, and lets the conversation expire.
The second suitor, a Mr. Howe, is younger and, briefly, promising. He is dressed as a highwayman, and the conceit suits him: he is quick, lively, and prone to mischief. “You know,” he confides, “I nearly came as a monk. But I feared it might send the wrong message.”
Eloise cannot help but be amused. “Whereas highwaymen are so famously chaste.”
His eyes crinkle at the corners. “A monk might be tempted to reform a lost soul. I am far too lazy for reform.”
This is, perhaps, the most honest thing she’s heard all evening. For a moment, Eloise allows herself to imagine a life in which wit, rather than breeding, was the chief concern. She leans in, curious. “And are you a lost soul, Mr. Howe?”
He grins. “On the contrary. I am remarkably content with my station. I fear it is the rest of London that must mend its ways.”
It is not love. It is not even a spark. But for a moment, Eloise finds herself in the presence of a real person. She is about to ask him something, anything, when Anthony’s hand descends upon her shoulder.
“Mr. Howe, you must excuse us. I have promised my sister to Lord Willoughby for the next set.” He steers Eloise away, as if to rescue her from a burning building.
“Was he so very dreadful?” Eloise asks, once they are clear of the crowd.
Anthony’s smile is sharp. “You must understand, sister, there are rules. Appearances. Even the most… unconventional gentlemen are not always the safest choice.”
Eloise wants to protest, to say that nothing is more dangerous than the slow suffocation of a polite match, but her brother is already gone, deposited elsewhere by the tides of the dance.
“Are you having fun?” her sister asks, voice full of mischief.
Eloise considers the question. “I am having… an experience.”
Daphne grins. “I like your costume. You look like you could set the whole place on fire.”
“That is the general idea,” Eloise whispers.
From somewhere behind her, she hears her mother’s laughter, and the music swells again, and the next dance is called. Eloise squares her shoulders, returns to the fray.
Eloise lasts only another quarter-hour before the masquerade begins to press at her temples like a too-tight band. She manages, barely, to avoid the attentions of a fourth suitor by retreating behind a pair of ornamental palms, where the air is cooler and the crowd’s scrutiny is muffled by a veil of green. She can see her mother, radiant with the success of the evening, already congratulating herself on the brisk trade in potential husbands.
It occurs to Eloise, not for the first time, that she might simply vanish, to slip out a side door, remove her ridiculous wig, and return to the life she left in Scotland. The temptation is so acute that her hands itch with it.
But there is her family to consider: her mother, who has organized this whole event; her brothers, who would surely be scandalized; her sisters, who love her, even if they do not always understand. And so she endures.
She studies the room through her mask, evaluating each marriageable pair like specimens on a slide. The girls, desperate to distinguish themselves, have rendered their bodies as canvases for display…some in peacock colors, others in pale, trembling pastels. The men are, without exception, more interested in each other than in their supposed partners.
Marriage is, Eloise realizes, an auction disguised as a romance. Every glance, every word, is currency. And her own value is determined not by wit or will but by the accident of her birth and the legend of the Bridgerton name. She is not a person to be courted, but a prize to be won, like a horse or a vase or an especially rare book.
If this was to be her future, she would rather have none at all.
She has heard whispers, here and there, of women who lived alone by choice. Spinsters, they were called, as if to suggest perpetual motion, endless turning without ever arriving at the center. She could do worse, Eloise reasons, than to become one of them. In solitude, at least, she could control the terms of her own existence.
If the evening has a climax, it is the arrival of Benedict Bridgerton. He appears not at the top of the stairs, like a conquering hero, but through a side door near the library, as if returning home after a midnight adventure. He is, as always, slightly rumpled, though in this instance the effect is deliberate: the black tailcoat is new, its brass buttons gleaming like coins; the white linen shirt, high-collared, is set off by a waistcoat of the palest blue, stitched with a pattern so subtle it could be mistaken for a shadow. His trousers are tailored to perfection, and his boots shine with the hard polish of neglect, as if he had only remembered to attend to them at the very last moment.
He wears a mask trimmed in black, austere and severe, but the cut of his jaw and the humor in his eyes are unmistakable. He moves through the crowd with the ease of someone who knows precisely how much he is admired, and who neither resents nor relishes it.
Eloise is seized with a sudden, fierce affection for him…her brother, her counterpart, her only true ally. He sees her at once, offers a conspiratorial smile, and crosses the room as if nothing could stand in his way.
“Eloise!” he says, spreading his arms in a gesture at once comic and sincere. “At last, the prodigal returns.”
She cannot help but laugh. “It is only a masquerade, not a resurrection. You, on the other hand, look as though you have come from the wars.”
He glances down at his attire, makes a show of brushing a nonexistent speck from his sleeve. “I was told that subtlety is the soul of elegance. You, I see, have chosen the path of open rebellion.”
She touches the edge of her wig, a faint flush coloring her cheeks. “It seemed apt.”
Benedict tilts his head, studies her with the intensity he reserves for canvases and sketches. “You do look rather like a French martyr,” he admits. “Though I suspect you would have set fire to your own pyre, just to see what would happen.”
“I would have written a pamphlet first,” Eloise says. “No one remembers the martyrs who kept silent.”
They stand together for a moment, a small island of sanity in a sea of forced merriment. Eloise feels, for the first time all night, that she is not entirely alone.
Benedict’s voice lowers. “How is it, truly, to be home? I have heard mother’s account, but she edits for drama.”
Eloise hesitates. She wants to tell him everything about the empty mornings, the late nights in the library, the feeling of being adrift and yet entirely herself. She wants to say that Scotland was freedom, and that this, for all its comfort, is a gilded cage.
Instead, she says, “It is… peculiar. London is louder than I remembered.”
Benedict’s eyes soften. “You will find your place, El. If not here, then somewhere better. And if you don’t, well, we shall set off and make our own.”
For a moment, Eloise almost believes him.
Then, inevitably, their mother arrives, her mask slightly askew, her cheeks flushed with triumph and champagne.
“Benedict!” she exclaims, as if he had returned from the dead. “You are late.”
“My apologies, Mother.”
“You may offer them to the young ladies awaiting introduction. It is high time you considered something serious.”
With that, Violet gently but firmly escorted him away toward a cluster of eager debutantes.
Eloise watched as the ladies practically illuminated beneath his attention. They leaned closer. They laughed too readily. They fluttered like moths drawn to a lantern.
The Bridgerton effect, she thought dryly.
Benedict, to his credit, never seems to prefer one over the others. He treats them all with the same mixture of mockery and admiration, as if the entire process is a game and he has already guessed the outcome.
Eloise cannot help but envy him, a little. In another life, she thinks, she might have been just like Benedict: clever, admired, unburdened by expectation. But the rules are different for men, and different again for Bridgerton men, and most different of all for the odd woman out.
She glances toward her mother, who is now deep in conversation with Lady Mondrich. Violet’s laughter rings out above the general din, bright and unyielding. Eloise knows that her mother’s heart is genuine, that all of this effort is, at its core, an act of love. But she also knows that Violet’s world is built on the twin pillars of marriage and reputation, and that deviation is both feared and pitied.
She sips her punch, trying to ignore the ache that builds at the base of her throat.
A sudden burst of laughter draws her gaze back to Benedict, who is now demonstrating some trick of sleight-of-hand for a delighted audience. He catches her eye across the room, winks, and goes back to his performance.
Eloise smiles despite herself. He has always known how to make her feel seen, even in a room full of strangers.
But the moment passes, as they always do. The music changes, the partners shift, and Benedict is led away by the daughter of a minor duke, her hand resting on his arm as if it were her natural place.
Eloise feels herself dissolving again, becoming invisible.
It is, she supposes, the Bridgerton effect.
Eventually, Eloise can bear the room no longer. She escapes to the refreshment table, hoping for a respite, or at least a few minutes of blessed anonymity. The punch is watery and sweet, the scent of candied orange peel cloying in her nostrils. She sips from the glass, only to nearly choke upon her indignation.
Hyacinth.
Her youngest sister stood near the edge of the ballroom in a white mask and gown, attempting very poorly to appear inconspicuous.
Hyacinth was meant to be in bed.
“Hyacinth Bridgerton,” Eloise hissed, marching toward her. “You are not of an age to attend such events.”
“Please, Eloise… only for a moment-”
“No.”
Ignoring her sister’s pleading, Eloise ushered her firmly toward the stairs. Once upstairs, Hyacinth wrenched free.
“I wish you had stayed in Scotland!” Hyacinth burst out, “You spoil everything.”
Eloise is stung, though she knows it is not meant unkindly. She watches her sister climb the stairs, then notices that Hyacinth’s mask has fallen to the floor. She bends to retrieve it, the filmy lace delicate in her hands.
She turns the silver mask over in her hands, tracing its delicate edges with her fingertips. Of course Hyacinth would crave this, the thrill of becoming someone else, if only for a few precious hours.What must it feel like to shed the weight of the Bridgerton name like an unwanted cloak? To move through a room and have eyes slide past rather than linger, calculating your worth, your connections, your marriageability? The thought unfurls inside her chest, dangerous and seductive as nightshade. For once, she could speak without measuring each syllable, laugh without covering her mouth, perhaps even dance with a stranger whose hands wouldn't tremble at the prospect of touching a Bridgerton. She could be…what? Not herself, certainly. Someone braver. Someone freer. Someone who doesn't lie awake wondering if she's wasting her one wild and precious life on drawing rooms and tea cakes. The mask gleams in the candlelight, offering a night of reprieve from the endless, exhausting performance of being Eloise Bridgerton.
One final rebellion before declaring herself permanently beyond the reach of the marriage market.
One night not as Eloise the Unapproachable.
But simply… a lady.
She does not hesitate. The thought, once had, will not be exorcised. She returns to their wing with purpose, avoiding her mother’s eagle gaze, and slips into Daphne’s old chamber. The closet is a riot of color, but she ignores the pastels and selects a gown of silver satin, sleek and almost sinfully low at the neck. There are gloves white silk, elbow-length, trimmed with lace at the wrist. Eloise hesitates only to marvel at her own recklessness, then sheds her Joan of Arc regalia and dons the new costume.
In her own room, she completes the transformation. The wig is discarded; her own hair, darker and finer, is twisted into loose waves and fixed with a silver comb. She applies powder and kohl in excess, enough to obscure her features but not invite mockery. She pins Hyacinth’s lace mask over her face and adds Daphne’s pearl ear-drops for good measure. A fan, painted with swooping swans, serves as her final armament.
She inspects herself in the looking-glass. The figure there is not Eloise Bridgerton, argumentative spinster-in-training, but a vision of the kind of woman the Ton adores: mysterious, malleable, inoffensive. She is both disgusted and elated.
The challenge now is to re-enter the ballroom without detection. The main staircase is too risky; she chooses instead the servants’ passage, winding through corridors lined with musty portraits and threadbare rugs. The kitchen staff are too busy with trifle and champagne to notice her.
It is a well-known fact that the servants’ entrance at Bridgerton House, a door so inconspicuous as to be invisible to the quality, is the only portal in all of Mayfair that may be opened with perfect impunity and no consequence. For this reason, and perhaps another entirely more perverse, Eloise finds herself standing upon its threshold, the heat of the kitchen beating against her back and the chill of the spring night swirling before her in conspiratorial invitation.
The door squeals open, cutting through her reverie. In its shadowed frame stands a man whose silhouette is so familiar that, for a moment, she is incapable of motion. His hair is mussed by the wind, his eyes glittering and inquisitive above the sharp contrast of his own black velvet mask.
Eloise froze and lifted her gaze.
Benedict.